Summer Learning Journey
Hi guys, welcome back. Today I am going to be doing day 4 of SLJ week 3. Today's activity is called "The Southern Light" So lets do this.
The Southern Light
Today I have to make a acrostic word poem only using the word "Light" also I have to describe the southern lights. OK here we go.
Limited In Certain Countries
It Is Irresistible
Glows Like The Stars
Has light
Totally Beautiful
Shines bright
Good morning Risha,
ReplyDeleteI couldn't help but stop by after reading this beautiful poem about beautiful lights. Your poem has reminded me of auroras near the magnetic poles. It is one of my dreams to see these beautiful lights in real life. One day I will travel to Alaska or Antarctica just to see these lights! It would be super freezing but hopefully I can handle it! Brr...
It is great to see that you are using images to illustrate your blog posts. Have you checked out the Explore tool? It helps you find photos that are labelled for reuse. Pixabay is also another amazing website with lots of photos you can use! You should definitely check out these online tools and make sure to double-check that there is 'no attribution required' for the images.
Let me know if you have any questions and happy blogging!
From Susie
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ReplyDeleteHello Risha,
ReplyDeleteIt is me your friend Talisa. I really like your poem it is really good. I created a poem too but it is not as good as yours. Next time I think you are meant to link your picture Risha. keep doing Summer Learning Journey till the end
Take care
Bula vinaka Risha,
ReplyDeleteThis is Susie again. How are you doing? I hope you are enjoying the last bit of your holidays before school starts. Have you been enjoying the sun outside?
I thought I might make a quick visit to give you a friendly reminder that our team members will still be online until the 25th of January. This means you are more than welcome to continue on with your SLJ activities. You have put in lots of time and effort into making your SLJ posts look amazing and I hope to see more of them before this journey comes to an end. Please join us if you have time to blog !
See you around,
Susie
Hey Risha,
ReplyDeleteI really like your explanation of the task you were doing. I think that most of your acrostic poem is descriptive and paints a picture in my head. I am wondering about "has light" I wonder if you could add a simile or metaphor to make it more descriptive?
Keep up the great work,
Miss Morgan