Persuasive Writing - I'm Finished

Hi, guys today I and going to be telling you about what we have been doing with Mrs Allan Fletcher. So for the past 5 weeks, we have been working on persuasive writing. We had 5 topics to chose out of I choose lunch should not be provided in schools. If you want to find out keep reading. I have finished it. Here it is: 

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Have you ever thought about your children’s lunches and thought about whether or not children should be provided lunches from the government or school? Would it be too much money for every student to have lunch every day? Well, the answer is really simple, it would be too much money. I believe that schools should NOT provide lunch for all students. Schools providing lunch can charge the taxpayers more money.  The reason I disagree that food should be provided because their parents should provide lunches for the children and final they could be allergic.

Firstly just imagine how hard it would be to make food every day for every student at your child’s school? It would be harder then you think! The thing that the school would have to do is get people who can make lunches every day and how much money would that be? Let’s say that if the school makes 10 lunches how much would that cost and then times that by 50 that would be 500 students and to feed. Talk about the budget.

Secondly, your parents should be responsible for providing lunch for there children. The parents should have the capabilities to make a healthy lunch for there kids. If they are not responsible the kids have a lot of jobs. Like they would have to make their own lunch, do the dishes, hang the clothes, jobs that would never end! Another reason is your parent shouldn’t just make lunches it should be healthy. 

Thirdly, schools providing lunch can charge the taxpayers more money. Just imagine every school in New Zealand has to provide lunches. That would be hard for the taxpayers. That’s a lot of money some schools have more than 500 students. How much money would be spent on lunches at schools?

Finally, one of the biggest reasons why we shouldn’t have lunches provided in schools is kids might have special diets. Like they might be allergic to some foods and if they are they would have to make a special type of lunch for them. That would cost a lot as well.   

So this conclusion I disagree that food should be provided at schools. It would be too much money and time. Parents should have the ability to make lunches. Taxpayers would be paid too much and finally, they would have to make special lunches for kids with a diet. That wraps up my opinion on food should not be provided!