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I am a student at in Uru MΔnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Sunday, May 3, 2020
Writing Time
Hi, guys hope you are all doing well, today I am wanting to share some writing that I have been doing. It's not really writing is me planning my writing and how the story will play on. This story is about a girl who tries to find her past family member. I have put a lot of work into my planning and my back story hope you like it. If you do please don't hesitate to comment. Bye!!!
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