Hi, guys today I am wanting to share with you my screencastify about what is a haiku. We had made a doc and added all of the information we know about haiku poems. Then I needed to make my own haiku for an example so I could show it on my video. I made two haikus that I am really proud of today and am showing them to you guys. If you don't know what a screencastify is, it is an app where you can make videos on your laptop. Anyways after that, I had to video my work about what is a haiku and then post it on my blog for you guys to see. Hope you like it here is my haiku DLO. BYE!
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, March 18, 2020
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Hola Risha it is Michaela here. I really like your blog post. I really enjoy watching your video. I like your photo matching your background. Maybe next's time you can proof read the line that says (I made two haiku's that I am really proud of today and am ) Did you like making and videoing your video. But anyway it is a good blog post.
ReplyDeleteHi Michaela thank you for commenting on my blog post. Thank you for spotting my spelling mistakes I will go change it now. Do you have a haiku that you have done and like? BYE!
ReplyDeleteThis is superb work Risha... not only your presentation, but your poetic writing which demonstrates pathos and sensitivity. Definitely publishable!:-)
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