In period 4 we had to make a DLO about Christmas Around The World. So we had to choose 3 countries to research about and what they do at Christmas time like traditions or Music. Hope you like it have a great day. Happy Holidays!
Wednesday, December 4, 2019
Monday, December 2, 2019
Creative Writing - Day Of The Death
Hi, guys today I will be sharing a story that I made! We had to make a story with only 4 paragraphs. Here is my Writing! Please give feedback and hope you like it!
Day Of The Death
The trees were green, the sky was blue and the mountains were looking over the misty blue ocean. As all the boats were sailing to the horizon in the navy blue seas, I smile with delight. I look closely at the bottom of the mountains I see the beach but no one is there. As everything feels like it is summer I sim to think I'm in heaven gazing at the blue water.
My name is Emily I recently moved here with my family, I'm the youngest out of my three brothers Lucus is the oldest he is 19, Sam is the second oldest he is 17, Jaxson is the youngest brother is our family he is 15 and I'm 12. We live in a house at the top of the mountains in England, we used to live in New Zealand but Dad got a job so we moved last month. I was heading to the beach because I wanted to know where everyone was.
Heading down to the beach the streets were empty usually the shops are open but they weren't. As I think that Jaxson calls out my name I turn back to see no one at all. It was very crazy because from where I was I could see only Sam in the garden and Lucus in the kitchen, mum and dad were shopping. Then I see a man who lives 3 blocks away from us he come out of his house and says to me that I should be at hom e it's The Day Of The Death!
That man goes back into his house and yells loudly and says there is a knife with blood everywhere. I thought he was joking but he opens the door and I see blood everywhere I look at the ground and see a bloody knife. I scream and run home to tell Lucas, Sam and Jaxson they all run to the house but as soon as they open the door there was no blood and no knife. Where is it?
Day Of The Death
The trees were green, the sky was blue and the mountains were looking over the misty blue ocean. As all the boats were sailing to the horizon in the navy blue seas, I smile with delight. I look closely at the bottom of the mountains I see the beach but no one is there. As everything feels like it is summer I sim to think I'm in heaven gazing at the blue water.
My name is Emily I recently moved here with my family, I'm the youngest out of my three brothers Lucus is the oldest he is 19, Sam is the second oldest he is 17, Jaxson is the youngest brother is our family he is 15 and I'm 12. We live in a house at the top of the mountains in England, we used to live in New Zealand but Dad got a job so we moved last month. I was heading to the beach because I wanted to know where everyone was.
Heading down to the beach the streets were empty usually the shops are open but they weren't. As I think that Jaxson calls out my name I turn back to see no one at all. It was very crazy because from where I was I could see only Sam in the garden and Lucus in the kitchen, mum and dad were shopping. Then I see a man who lives 3 blocks away from us he come out of his house and says to me that I should be at h
That man goes back into his house and yells loudly and says there is a knife with blood everywhere. I thought he was joking but he opens the door and I see blood everywhere I look at the ground and see a bloody knife. I scream and run home to tell Lucas, Sam and Jaxson they all run to the house but as soon as they open the door there was no blood and no knife. Where is it?
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